SharonsFlame

what about the hangers? back then didn't they just use pugs ,boxes & shelves? hangers would be considered a great invention right? lol

this System sucks. it seems to be using her as much as anyone else.

yes, I like Nephis it's just this topic aboout the Citadel that irritates me.

even if she built up the citadel & made it what it is did she have Sunny's permission? it belonged to him & she just took it upon herself to do so? come on. OK with her push, take no prisoners attitude it figures she'd usurp the place as it's a great safe base of operations for "her people".

I loved the story. Only a couple of things bothered me. 1. What happened to the doctor who followed the Daniel's family? Last we heard, he wanted to awaken then nothing. also what about the chef lady who worked for Old Master Daniel's who traveled to the base with them it said she joined her family, but wouldn't she remain working fir the family to help support her family and keep them safe? also, towards the end, it mentioned how everyone in the Williams family died but didn't actually say Mr Williams died. if they kept him alive till his wife was found dead, he would have had no family, so wouldn't they have done the surgery anyway? or contact Anna as the only other Williams on the base?

Chapter 560 what about The Daniel's family, Doctor? Last we heard, he wanted to awaken. That was back around the time Old Master Daniel's A.K.A. Grandpa awakened.

I've noticed that Anna & Dlyan. have NOT been to their base in a while. Are Anna's plants still ok? Wouldn't the abundance of dull powder in them attract mutated animals?

why doesn't Kiesha sell some of her spiritual crops online to others. like how she bought the book from Murim world. it would help her rebuild her store credit at least right?

I loved the story, but I feel that it ended very quickly. There is so much more that could have been done with the story. like taking over & cleaning up the city. clearing out the riffraff & making it a safe place for survivors. to the ML & FL relationship. Getting the city on its feet & self sustaining etc. fir sction they could have a Zombie wave, Mutated beast attacks etc.... sorry....Just felt that so much more could still have been done. I loved the story & didn't want it to end so soon. lol thanks for the great writing author! A+ Work

CHAPTER 6& 7 are a different book. I really wanted to read from the cliffhanger where she used the sword to cut the door in half. it returned to the original story in Chapter 8, but it was another scene we have no lead up to explain what's going on. if I don't see a post replying that this is fixed then I am done reading this story NOW ! honestly, it's too bad the story really caught my interest. I'd have love to keep reading **Sigh**