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I love it so far, but don’t make to mc save will in the second chapter, he needs to be taken or the entire plot will be ruined.
Keep it the same but make it so he will always be more powerful than the other ghost riders he makes.
It’s to soon.
Love it need more chapters
LOVE IT. We need a good stranger things fanfic and from reading your previous work in this book so far, I can tell you would make an amazing stranger things fanfic.
Keep Lokis original personality
Keep them as Odins children
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