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The training montage is a bit too long
Seriously , there are more filler chapters than PLOT , the IDEA is good , the execution is so bad that it hurts , PHYSICALLY !! I vote rewrite
SLIVER HAIRED MARGOT ROBBIE??
This a a copy of a novel by Dragon15681 , It Started With Devils & Artefacts
This a a copy of a novel by Dragon15681 , It Started With Devils & Artefacts --------------------
how long before we get back to main story
even the intro is AI written , __
PLAGIARISIM , I am pretty sure I read this story before by Dragon15681 https://www.webnovel.com/book/it-started-with-devils-artefacts_22233744805060005
As of chapter 27 The character design in just cringe , but that's ok, but what i can't stand is BLOODY AI WRITING, seriously your previous book about voldy SI was so much better, I had high hopes , the plot line is good but cannot tolerate the AI WRITING, I regret not being able to give less that 1 start for Wiring Quality PS : If ai wiring stops or becomes more tolerable like not 5 adjectives every sentence , leave a reply , i'll continue reading this book