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Why are there no updates?

I am super excited you are writing again. I continued to check back hoping you would not abandon this novel.

Great grandfather, Lucious is his son. He will be a grandfather.

This is over the top for a married woman whose husband is unconscious in the hospital because he took a bullet for her. How insensitive, going to the Arcade should have been enough. But this is crossing the line. If my husband ever did that to me while I am laying in the hospital, and especially with some one that likes him I would be filing for divorce. That is the ultimate betrayal and I could careless my mouth said it is ok. Still divorced!!!!

AUTHOR, I CAN’T READ THIS BOOK. YOU HAVE TOO MANY MISSPELLED WORDS. You have run on sentences, and switching characters name. ALL OF THIS MAKES MY HEAD HURT. IT IS TOO MUCH TO TRY TO READ. PLEASE REMOVE THIS NOVEL AND CORRECT ALLLL OF THE ERRORS, and it is a lot.

AUTHOR, I am really thick of you. Do you mean sick of you? This is very difficult to read.

This novel is difficult to read, the names are all over the place.

Gosh there are alot of misspelled words, it makes it difficult to read.

Infertility, I think infidelity.

I am sure they are requiring us to purchase additional chapters, which is crazy.