amazing!

I can't wait for more!

First of all, the story's plot sounds interesting! The writing quality is perfect, story development is going nicely, characters (especially Ember!) are realistic...Overall, its really good.

Yeah, you should, its super interesting! For the writer's block, maybe you could write about how Chris persuades Ember to (fully) be his or something.

This is so interesting!

The story is very well developed and the characters are extremely realistic (excluding the part where he is a demon). The chapter are long, which is really good, and the author's plot is amazing!

Cool...

I agree!

This book is awesome! There are good characters that sound like real people and the story will get you hooked in no time! I particularly liked the character Qui Yizhen because she sounds like an interesting person...

The book is good, but I don't like the coins.