Saltycarmel69

their Greek gods.... ......you know exactly what it means

gojo

thats not my point buddy

but its 20 usd?

shush

shouldn't it be 5250?

eh, it's not the worst I've ever seen. It definitely has the potential to become a great fan fic, but I think it needs a proofreader so everything falls together smoother, and while the writing is definitely readable and a lot better than most mtl, it could use some sprucing up in a couple places. overall, if you're looking for something to read, i would put this in consideration, but otherwise, i would leave it for another day. P.S. this isn't to make the author upset or anything. It's to offer some criticism to the author to look into to make it flow better and more readable, but otherwise, good job writing and sticking to it. kudos to you

your are dumb as shit

shut up fuck nugget, i can't stand anymore dragonesk mc's, so you better buckle up and shut up cause i will find you and force you to watch boku no pico on repeat for days

shhhhh, you might hurt your head trying to figure it out, not worth the effort