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A Self Entitled Piece of Shit.
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Kurum170k124k114hコメントit would be pretty cool if he was in the middle, neither light nor dark, but willing to do Both if need be.
(AN: So Jaden is going to spend the time he has trying to become a competent Jedi, will he have enough time? Will be become a good general ? Idk I'm tired. Anyway comment on this chapter if you actually like this story or if I should just add it to the back of the list.)- Kurum170k124k14mthコメント
I Love this story but the last 3 chapters were of no use as the info dump had no effect on the story as a whole it would have been better if you had just made it into a few paragraphs instead of 3 whole chapters as I skipped the chapters and had no discrepancies with the story going forward.
Chapter 56 The First Step Toward The Fruity Three Sisters - Kurum170k124k16mthコメントCh 29 Chapter 29 : kunou
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not that I'm going to drop it, it just lazy writing to me.
'Should I find a lover? no, no, no…. even though I'm now a girl but I still think I'm a boy so it's impossible for me to want to have sex with the man~' I thought quickly to deny it. - Kurum170k124k17mthコメント
I always see this excuse with gender ends stories and it's annoying.
'Should I find a lover? no, no, no…. even though I'm now a girl but I still think I'm a boy so it's impossible for me to want to have sex with the man~' I thought quickly to deny it. - Kurum170k124k17mthコメント
i Love this story but the plot line it jumps all over the place.
Well, for those of you who can follow the story, do tell me if you think I'm going in a straight line or if I'm jumping everywhere like a wild chicken without a head. - Kurum170k124k18mthコメント
this was actually my first decision game I have ever played. after completing it I bought the others.
Did you know that the Reboot of devil may cry is so different that Eva Vergil and Dante's mother was apparently an angel in the reboot? - Kurum170k124k18mthコメント
it's fine I honestly didn't notice the change in his attitude.
[As an apology, here's a bonus chapter. You don't have to give me power stones for this, I must repent for my mistake.] - Kurum170k124k18mthコメント
what was the point in asking us if we would like Fiona in the harem if you just disregard the poll in the first place.
[This could be good news or bad news to you all. Princess Fiona would be included in the harem, I mean she's not totally an Ogre, right? It's just a curse and the reason why it became permanent was because it was Shrek who kissed her. One more thing, unlike Tigress and the others, Princess Fiona would be more like an extra heroine, she won't get much screentime like the others and probably wouldn't get that much development. You can say she's just there to add some spice in his nightly adventures.] - Kurum170k124k18mthコメント
if he's going to get a new body what is the point of calling him Linus if he's just going to get new names like with anakim.
Linus Ozias POV: - Kurum170k124k18mthコメント
no thanks, Shrek deserves love.
[Would you like Fiona to be included in the harem? I mean, she's an ogre and I kinda don't like her personality so I think I wouldn't include her in the harem. I apologize for those who were expecting her to be included in the harem.] - Kurum170k124k18mthコメント
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2. Drop in with normal human form from Worm - Kurum170k124k19mthコメント
oh you really don't know how to end chapters without cliffhangers.. huh.
The answer is... - Kurum170k124k19mthコメント
please don't bring Niko into this, he just wanted out of the criminal scene.
That should be Niko Bellic, the main protagonist of GTA IV. He's currently in hiding after making enemies with the Russian Mob and the Italian Mafia, but considering his skill set, they shouldn't be much of a problem for him. He'll be a massive help for my plans so I'm planning on getting in contact with him in the future. - Kurum170k124k19mthコメント
see you do this every chapter.
[Cliffhanger-kun: I, Cliffhanger-kun is back! My presence is necessary in order to leave you all hanging!! Muwahahaha!] - Kurum170k124k19mthコメント
it would have be more effective if you didn't do this with every chapter so I was expecting this to happen.
[Cliffhanger-kun: Muwahahaha! It is I, Cliffhanger-kun! How does it feel to be blue-balled, huh?!? Suffer!] - Kurum170k124k110mthコメントCh 120 118 Ah... I see
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this one is great. please continue.
1) Do you want me to continue the story, it will take a lot of time till I reach that 56 chapter.