About your rant my only problem was kessica losing her memory nothing else about your story

You could have made it so that jessica wanted to breakup after the incident rather than forgetting about him

The novel is too slow paced for my liking and the characters are not that great the mc is too passive

The MC gathered 100 troops last chapter but it only says 20 troops here

It is were not we’re in the second line of this paragraph

who is the kid that was bullied? Is that the mc or someone else? If he is mc who is william Hunter?

YOU COPIED THIS NOVEL COPYCAT http://wbnv.in/a/cchNBNu

Bro where is the weekly update of the Marvel novel???

Bro I dont understand anything in this chapter good luck in the future ones

So dont worry about Votes and views bro those people that like your story are still reading this even if we dont check this every day:)

Author it is your fault your release dates are random so we dont know it you dropped the book or not and only check this once a month or so. If you want consistency in your readers you need to be consistent too.

It is picked right? When will the new chapters be updated?

Bro when is the next chapter. Is the story being dropped?

Thank you

19 Perfect body ones not ultimate body

Naruto Marvel

2 years later......................

+1

Mc is too lazy and an idiot.................................................................................................................

This is a good book even tho it is very similar to The god of investment the stability of updates and the time span in story are more realistic than that one