Morning_DawnStar

+1

Sure I don’t have a problem with MC that are mad or insane. It just felt a little forced. like if you wanted a story we’re the mc hated the gods it would’ve felt more natural if it happened more gradually over a couple of chapters. Not all boom you’re in a new world and I killed everyone you know loved and the planet you were on have fun of that. But it’s still a great book. I just felt you could’ve done better with giving him a deep hatred for the gods.

It’s a good story and I hoping it gets better, but I also feel like he dropped the ball in the hole driving him insane in the first chapter. There was 1 million ways you can do it better but I feel like you went with the first ham-fisted approach you could think of

When is he going to meet magnus again?

Try the Phoenix

He’s doing this too much he should level up all his abilities at five and only check it then

We’re have you been?

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