AmeStar8
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2020-09-06 入りましたGreenland
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AmeStar82 years ago発表Lots of plot holes, but I understand what you mean you're going to make an ex.chapter to cover the holes, I suggest you find an editor for your novel, because of your explanation of the background of the world and The strength is already very good, only in the character and story development, please improve.
- AmeStar84 years agoに返信 AmeStar8
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- AmeStar84 years agoコメント
lanjut!
- AmeStar84 years agoに返信 TheCreatorOfRice
yea, im also curious
- AmeStar84 years ago発表
I Love It. ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️
この本は削除されました。 - AmeStar84 years agoコメント
Lanjutkan Thor
- AmeStar84 years agoコメント
ITS Begin?