Novelreader12333
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2020-09-05 入りましたGlobal
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Novelreader123331d発表This is actually so good as it feels a bit more realistic as compared to other books. The original main character Adriel actually feels like he was a main character and seems to be really strong and I’m interested into how this progresses just hope it isn’t harem and while it can be romance it’s be better if the romance is natural and not forced
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Thanks for ur feedback I’l take it into consideration
Months passed and the girl was pregnant and living alone, she was ostracized by her family and everyone around her for getting pregnant before marriage which made her lose everything. As time passed she remembered that the father of her child is a member of the Ubuyashiki family. No idea how to contact him she felt hopeless but would not give up. The women with black her fell to the floor in her grief and disappointment. " why did I sleep with him". She repeated that sentence over and over and over again. Remembering everything about that moment and not understanding what compelled her to sleep with that man. - Novelreader1233310mthに返信 Lazy_Emporer
What
Months passed and the girl was pregnant and living alone, she was ostracized by her family and everyone around her for getting pregnant before marriage which made her lose everything. As time passed she remembered that the father of her child is a member of the Ubuyashiki family. No idea how to contact him she felt hopeless but would not give up. The women with black her fell to the floor in her grief and disappointment. " why did I sleep with him". She repeated that sentence over and over and over again. Remembering everything about that moment and not understanding what compelled her to sleep with that man. - Novelreader1233310mthに返信 Lazy_Emporer
Ok thanks for your feed back
There is nothing she could do now but accept that her life as she knows it is done for. No one could save her and she was all by herself. " bdm, bdm bdm" she could hear something. She looked around but didn't she anything. " bdm beep bdm beep" the sound became louder and louder which caused her legs to start moving. She kept moving and moving with no water and no breaks as her body became weaker and weaker. Her leg was falling apart and her flesh was rotting and yet the sound was getting louder which made her run even faster. " boom" she bumped into someone," what where you're going" says a man with red eyes but the same face and hair as the father of her child. " I have you're child help him survive please " and then her water breaks and her heart finally gives up. - Novelreader1233310mthに返信 Unknown_Unknown_8234
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