Austin_oates

how does cherm relate to magic ??

you should rename this story he is part of the richest family in the world but has no access to it. it's basically a kid making his own fortune after the richest family abandons him basicaly

your going to hell

a was just fast he didn't have the third raikageis defense. minato almost kild him with a kunai, and he did not have tailed beast level Chakra. the only person that had that level chackra was kisame, and he was kalled the tailes tailed beast. also you nerfed the sharingan he is fast but not that fast even sasuke who just awakend could see him and a was a his peak then not now.

a is not that strong. You're buffing him too much

dude katara became a mater water bender in like three months. Their skills should not have such a big gap

the author is a drama writer and it's anoyong

this is stupid

this sounds stupid

we have learned more about the side characters than the mc. Get on with it. At this rate, you're gonna need 100 chapters before he even becomes a ninja