Justice_2_Free

This is a fantastic work of literature. It's got the kind of thought provoking themes that I very rarely see in books nowadays. Each paragraph I read makes me just want to keep reading more. I would Highly recommend checking this book out!

It's amazing how many writers miss this.

This is good so far. The Grammar needs a bit of work, but the atmosphere and inner turmoil of the character is set up excellently. Well done. Can't wait to read more!

Very good. Very good. I appreciate your style of writing and look forward to more of it!

I would reword it to be "With whom Dr. Robotnik had a struck a deal in order to create Shadow

Very well done. I enjoyed reading this chapter.

Okay yeah, the word irate didn't mean what I thought, so thanks for pointing that out!

I love how you've raised the stakes and made the world feel bigger than the main characters by sharing Ellia's backstory. This is getting better and better.

"but was to drowsy recall who they belonged to" Shouldn't it be: "Too drowsy to recall?"

"He had convinced him it wasn't a good idea" Who had convinced him? Bain? Or was it himself?