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I pity the poor sap that has to ascend to the next circle without my [Cultivation] skill.- shadow_serpent4dコメントCh 180 Chapter 180- Fire Lead
- shadow_serpent18dコメント
I feel like the "gosa waters" is repeated to much here.
After four days of flight, they had reached the coastline of Gosa Waters. - shadow_serpent26dコメント
just finished my binge read of this lovely novel and now it's time for a mini-review!!Overall, the story is superb. Although it does take a bit to pick up in pace, it's worth the wait. The slight errors in Grammer are neglible. Overall a great read. Can't wait for more!(side note- it'd be interesting if mc could use his quirk to maybe give/alter people's quirk factor. or maybe his at least. Only reason I say it'd be possible is when he mentioned how he shape-shifts, Like his body is lines of code and he just edits it. He could do that to others once he reaches a certain mastery over his quirk. Just a thought.)
Ch 85 Chapter 84:- Attackers Identity - shadow_serpent1mthコメント
because the only other powered person he's seen other than him and David is there? I feel like that's a good reason.
With little time for contemplation, Malachi decided to inform the group upstairs first that they were safe to come outside. There was no specific reason for choosing this group first; it was a quick, instinctive decision. - shadow_serpent1mthに返信 Bodhi_sattva
no problem! I try to do it when I catch repeated mistakes. I'd recommend re-reading what you have posted so far and check for errors.
この段落は削除されました。 - shadow_serpent1mthに返信 Kinshu_War
I am now far more inclined to read this through. However, small tip, you often no place "i" before "am" so it comes as "am sorry, ____"
But what he or Lovette didn't expect was that that very determination would be a catalyst of something much greater and beautiful in Cole's journey. - shadow_serpent1mthに返信 Kinshu_War
hopefully no harem.
But what he or Lovette didn't expect was that that very determination would be a catalyst of something much greater and beautiful in Cole's journey. - shadow_serpent1mthコメント
"Dave seized the opportunity, "?? who's Dave? And what opportunity?
この段落は削除されました。 - shadow_serpent1mthコメント
??????
この段落は削除されました。 - shadow_serpent1mthコメント
This entire paragraph makes no sense.
この段落は削除されました。 - shadow_serpent2mthに返信 Ben_CresswellCh 17 Sword
- shadow_serpent2mthコメント
so wait, this increases status durations for him? and Like skill effect-duration?
- The user calls upon the Gha Agsheblah Domain that doubles the user's time for a certain duration. - shadow_serpent2mthコメント
wait wait no this doesn't make sense. the dimensions harvester just let's you borrow the skill correct? if so; then the how did it level up? Did the training simply raise his own spearmenship aside from the other one? And at this point the other version of him has leveled that skill up to lvl 2?
[You have activated Dimension Harvester.] - shadow_serpent2mthコメント
should be "bracing" not "branching"
A second after Jacob activates his talent, the monster starts to change direction. They roar and start running at the two hundred men who are branching for impact. - shadow_serpent2mthコメント
I REALLY hope this doesn't lead to excessive fawning over mc; and or harem.
As Vargus navigated through the division, he couldn't help but notice the curious glances directed his way. It became clear to him that his presence was an anomaly in this female-dominated area, marking him as the first male, other than the sect leader, to step foot here. - shadow_serpent2mthコメントIn short, everything Grey had done was ridiculously twisted, and he was now selling himself as a hero and potential business partner while using it to make money. Like a boss.
- shadow_serpent2mthコメント
"rhythm" is repeated to quickly.
The rhythm of the battlefield has changed. The rhythm has changed with Jullian and his unit creating havoc in the enemy's backline and now a new unit joining the battle. The previous defensive tactic that Alexander quickly changed into an offensive one.