NeedaBreak4mLife

Welcome to the group! LOL

Ep 8, around 3:44

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

LOL a ghost being frightened to death 🤣 That's quite a skill, Cheng Qianli 😂

Read up to Chapter 19... So far, the world and character building is pretty good, but I can see issues with the MC having a no-kill rule. It makes sense for him to be unwilling to kill, but given the world and environment he's in, it's an issue as already seen with James. The descriptions of the world, characters, Axel's actions, etc, are good that I can picture what is happening in my head. Overall grammar, spelling, syntax, etc. is really good with very little to no errors that don't take away from the reading experience. Good job, Author. Keep it up!

How could James fall onto Axel if he should be a distance away when he threw the dagger? 🤔

I would have left him for dead after all the vile things he's done and for trying to kill Axel... but that's just me

Lol as if he'd just stand there and let you kill him 🙄

@author ...He wants me because he [probably]...