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amazing , The story is really great, from writing about the main characters and their real moods, to writing about the wizarding world in general and well there is no exaggeration or deficiency, Also, bringing and merging some things from the first world and the world of magic, and not merging everything into the world of wizards, and thus there will be a calamity on top of the problems that include Voldemort, And the problems that Severus will have to defend himself against because they will bother him. 🌟💖🌟💖🌟💖🌟💖🌟💖🌟💖 [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

[img=recommend] A wonderful story. It is true that the change in the plot made me nervous because of the hidden enemies, but it is a wonderful change in the plot The change in Sasuke's personality is subtle and wonderful, He did not follow Sasuke's original path nor did he completely ignore it, Also, his current group of friends is calm and refreshing Although Naruto is more or less the same, his current group of friends is completely different from the rest of the stories I've read, forcing the character to stick around the prominent members of Naruto's generation.Or even force 'MC' to become friends with all the famous characters of Naruto's generation , The development of strength, although it is strange when he obtains the Mangekyou Sharingan or when he merges Zetsu and obtains the wood release, but this is okay. Anyway, it's a great story[img=recommend]

I support you, please more ,please😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓

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No harem please 😫🙏🙏💓 (╥﹏╥) (╥﹏╥) (╥﹏╥) (╥﹏╥) (╥﹏╥) Maybe two ✌(˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)

Please change the font type in conversations, in the middle of chapter 29 and chapter 30, only rectangles appear .. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I hope the sickle doesn't affect Zeus too much, I don't want him to become like the real Zeus.... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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There are some mistakes, there are no interactions or dialogues with the characters، The second year ended with some short dialogues even with his friends and family, some introductions in the classes at the beginning of the school year Conversations with professors or even put simple dialogues and answer questions, only enough at the beginning of the school year and the second half of it after the holiday and the rest of the year can be presented, for example: "The bell rang at the end of the Transfiguration lesson" or something like that and then he finds an excuse for himself from his friends, it seems like he is alone In the castle and his house as if they are non-playable characters and they do not talk except when asked, all conversations with AI

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