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but i want the Mahouka, not Dxd
yessss finally!!!!!
I like the story, its wholesome. MC and FL chemistry is good too, a gentle kind physician and a tyrant empress
bro the potential of these fic if you add them especially the manga ones, people's mind will break and they will love it
there's soooo many normal world anime villain out there, so many that could destroy and break the mc without even breaking a sweat
there, i put the reason why people drop this book. oh another thing many did that thing and they were approved because their work is not on normal world(i think you said many times that its really an ordinary world correct me if im wrong). And the way you did it is not very good, like you just suddenly put him there out of nowhere, "you also see a floating screen didn't you"(something like that i forgot)
you know what you did wrong? you just suddenly put the 2nd reincarnator there, you also said that it's an ordinary world it's not about being scared that mc have a challenge or someone might steal his girls its about the poor placement, you should have written him in early chapters or about the potential other reincarnators. Because people are okay with story with many reincarnators and mc purge them or mc goes to another worlds and purge these reincarnators(I've read hundreds of these stories, yes its mtl). you also should have put a warning that you'll add them later on and you said that its an ORDINARY WORLD, if you want mc to have a challenge theres so many anime villain there, make them as evil as you want as powerful(politically and financially) as you want. besides mc doesn't have a magical power or op power so these villains even from normal world is enough for the mc, their even over the top for the current mc did you get it?
they are useful tho, so what now only abilities that make you stronger is important? you sound like a reasonable person there but you really don't know what you're talking about