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MistressUnderworld

MistressUnderworld

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Will continue to write fictional stories until I find someone to firewalk with me.

2020-08-09 入りましたIndonesia
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 mango_blossom

    he's a club captain

    Ch 69 Sebastian 0.3
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    Jaded & other romances
    若者 · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 mango_blossom

    I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. Thank you for waiting and the never ending support! (ꈍᴗꈍ)

    Ch 61 Vernon 0.5
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    Jaded & other romances
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 mango_blossom

    She is a new character, but who knows. Maybe one story might slip into another.... *wink*wink*

    Ch 57 Vernon 0.1
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    若者 · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 mango_blossom

    4 more days till a comeback :)

    Ch 56 For the girl in white
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    Jaded & other romances
    若者 · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 CaleBob_Phish

    Hehehe shh...

    Ch 2 Where It Should've Ended pt.2
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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    ファンタジー · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 mango_blossom

    Hopefully soon, but I am currently working on my other work exclusively. Do check it out while I try my best and stir up new dramas for Jade ;) Thank you for the interest! Hope you enjoy my work so far

    Ch 56 For the girl in white
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    Jaded & other romances
    若者 · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 mango_blossom

    Gotta stay to find out ;)

    Ch 56 For the girl in white
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    Jaded & other romances
    若者 · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 Hua_Li_An

    Thank you so much. I agree with you as I didn't have such a clear idea when I started the book, but I have tried to improve ever since. I appreciate the honest review and suggestion. I'll definitely try to make up for the lack of structure.

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 Scarlettheartt

    Hey! I do some digital art. If you're interested, you can add me on discord and talk more about it. MistressUnderworld#5385 Hope to hear from you. Have a nice day :)

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    都市 · Scarlettheartt
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 xiaohai_23

    Thank you so much! I appreciate the compliment. Hope you enjoy the book (ꈍᴗꈍ)

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 YawningBrain

    Thank you! Don't be shy to read more to know what they're capable of ;)

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    ファンタジー · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 Littlepunnie

    Thanks for the review! And yeah, I guess 7 deadly sins is a pretty big topic in the art world, but I'm trying to give it my own spin. I'm glad you like the titles (ꈍᴗꈍ)

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    ファンタジー · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    発表

    I don't know much about the story yet, but I can see a potential in the plot. Some punctuation errors around the dialogues can be improved with a little editing. Keep writing :)

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    Attack On Angels
    アクション · Katekichi
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    発表

    Cool story. And I'm loving the way you introduce the background setting of the story. Super interesting plot. Dying to read more. A minor editing and proofreading could definitely improve the writing, but it's good overall

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    Holy World
    ファンタジー · EmpRabbit
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    発表

    The descriptions and narration are pretty well done. Some minor spelling or grammar errors, but nothing major. I would like to see what the characters can offer. Keep up the good work!

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    Love or Obsession?
    都市 · IrisSky
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    発表

    The cover of the book is so cute! I'm obsessed with the plot and character. So unique and intricate. It's such a fresh and interesting idea. All I can suggest is make the paragraphs shorter. Overall, it's soooo cool. Please keep writing :)

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    Lucifer's horrors circus
    ホラー · Esther_Heredia
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    に返信 Littlepunnie

    I'm glad you do. Read more, I promise you won't fall in love *wink*wink*

    Ch 2 Where It Should've Ended pt.2
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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    ファンタジー · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    発表

    I enjoy the descriptive style of writing and how you painted the plot for the readers. The lines and paragraphs are easy to read too. Cliché plot but the excellent delivery makes a difference. Keep up the good work :)

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    The Crown Prince Thinks I'm a Guy
    ファンタジー · Hua_Li_An
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    発表

    I love thriller and stories with twists that keeps me on my toe. Your story is interesting, but a little bit fast paced. And some grammatical errors here and there. Nothing crucial enough to bother me, but definitely noticeable. A little bit of improvement and proof-reading will go a long way. Best of luck!

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    The last one remaining
    ホラー · s8a4o10101
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    発表

    I love the twist and how you reel people into the story. Love the sci-fi character and environment. Not what I usually read, but this is interesting. I think the formatting can be improved. But overall it's intriguing to read and see what happens next.

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    Abluvion
    ファンタジー · LinYang
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