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Steven_Spoon1dに返信 LtFishI wasn't but I am now. lol
"Fourth Son of the Chancellor of Gormana, Niall Leopold." The man stood to introduce himself.- Steven_Spoon12dコメント
this isn't inexperienced. this is just common sense. you don't give money without seeing the product.
'I'm such an idiot...' - Steven_Spoon12dコメント
thar was the dumbest choice I have ever read. he gave any amount of money over without seeing the property first? especially when you realised he is trying to scam you.
この段落は削除されました。 - Steven_Spoon15dに返信 Cookie_Lavander
so who is the girl in this relationship?
bloomer and a wuss, and at this point, he couldn't deny it. - Steven_Spoon16dコメント
at this point, the right thing to do would be to push him. they are just allowing him to come up with ways to not do anything.
"Okay, if that's what you really want," Yuuta agreed. "But… we're getting impatient - Steven_Spoon18dコメント
I find him at this point almost as bad as her parents. Alone, he will tell her sweet things, but side we don't exist. I don't care how scared you are of something, but you just don't do that to people you are making a relationship with, whether it's romantic or just friends. don't tell me you can rely on you than turn around and act like we got nothing to do with each other.
couldn't just nod and say he'd start talking to her whenever she wanted. - Steven_Spoon18dコメント
seriously confess. how hard can a woman throw herself at you and you not get it.
"A weakness to me, am I right?" - Steven_Spoon18dに返信 BleakKnight
nope. we all did.
"Roger, roger." - Steven_Spoon20dコメント
yo, what's wrong with this guy? he doesn't like sweet, he doesn't like hit, he doesn't like sour. what a flavorless life he lives.
he wasn't looking forward to finding the super-spicy and super-sour chocolates she'd - Steven_Spoon1mth発表
so I have only read the first chapter, and I am sold on this story already. thank you for not creating a pathetic character that just collapses right off the bat like the world is ending. I don't expect him to be a genius, but he should at least know when to give and take, you know, have backbone. I look forward to many more releases.
- Steven_Spoon1mth発表
- Steven_Spoon1mthに返信 Ash_thirumuruCh 3 3. Four Friends
- Steven_Spoon2mthコメントCh 216 How the Real Calliope Ended Up There
- Steven_Spoon2mthコメントCh 195 Keeping a Memento of Her Previous Life
- Steven_Spoon2mthコメント
please work on getting the correct name for your characters. it completely stops the flow of the story tring to figure out who you're writing about.
この段落は削除されました。 - Steven_Spoon3mthに返信 The_Sweet_Sparrow
couldn't agree more.
"I see, you know, last year a young lady in town claimed the Baron had abducted her, beat her and had his way with her body. No one accepted the tale and assumed she had run around and got herself in a bad way. The entire town thought she was lying and shunned her." - Steven_Spoon3mthコメントThe Day Is Almost Over, Hang In There
- Steven_Spoon3mthコメントCh 58 Interrogated