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DareMeNot

DareMeNot

Lv4

Just... DareMeNot

2020-08-05 入りましたPhilippines
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  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot2 months ago
    発表

    Fic's great Bro, not gonna lie. Sure it's still in its "calm before the storm" arc, so the happenings are understandably a little uneventful with not much alien action, but still, it was able to grab my interest. There were also some plot holes here and there and a few errors in grammars which are hardly noticeable, so you might want to focus on that. Overall, you've got somethin' big going on here man, so don't stop updating.

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  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot8 months ago
    発表

    Friggin' great! Man, don't exactly why but, kept me reading the whole thing from start to finish in one sitting, which, doesn't happen much anymore because of all the shits that I've read, so great job author!

  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot10 months ago
    発表

    Real Steel ey? That's a first...........

  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot2 years ago
    に返信 Yuri_is_Ntr

    Almost got me. Thanks for the save.

  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot2 years ago
    コメント

    Okay, one question. Does he have the Zenkai Boost? Because if he does, then wouldn't this penalty be a reward instead but in a twisted and more masochistic fashion? Just saiyan~.

  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot2 years ago
    発表

    Zahahahahax! Definitely one of the best Naruto fic I've ever read on this platform! It's a wholesome story completed with action, comedy, drama, and romance. A great choice to read if you don't have anything to do, it will make you feel fulfilled in a sense. Anyway. Great Job Monkey! Zahahahahax

  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot2 years ago
    に返信 AzureFluteFan2

    Beats me...

  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot2 years ago
    発表

    Good job man... Going great so far. Really like how you add fantastical touches in the story as well as how you fit certain events little tidbits together that actually kind of makes sense... Anyway. Don't drop 'cause you're doing a great job.

  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot2 years ago
    に返信 kenzel

    So~... Should I read it, or not?

  • DareMeNot
    DareMeNot2 years ago
    発表

    Been enjoying the story so far, and the pace that you are going is really to my liking. Fast, but not too fast to the point that it's almost disgusting. Really enjoying how you mix other elements from different animes, just try not to add something that wouldn't fit the world that he's in... Alright? But anyway, don't listen to the rabbles that the other readers are on, just keep at your own pace. Finally, don't you dare nerf him... — DareMeNot