CosmosGalaxZ
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Hello, Author here, this is to let everyone know that despite many trials and tribulations life is currently throwing at this author, this author is going to keep on updating whether slow or fast and bring the novel to its satisfactory ending.Alright, then the shameless five stars are for all the hard work and effort that I have put into making the novel.Thank you. Take care you all. Bye Bye.
The author used a lot of the word ‘then’, I hope the author deletes it or uses it in a way that is comfortable to read. Also, the story plot seems interesting but there is something about reading it that is the issue. I hope this quote help the author when editing his work and that is, ‘you need to become the reader when you edit the story instead of its writer’. On that note, I wish the author all the best with his new work. Keep it up!![img=recommend]
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😆consider it a change
Hi, dear reader, I get it where you are coming from but Lin family ’s tragedy was a must for the plot as I designed it to be felt painful 😅. Between for the extras part you’ll get to know as you continue the story. I am sorry if it’s not to your liking as the title ‘Cold Palace’ itself says it all. Throughout the entire story you will experience an emotional roller coaster ride😉