RandomCruelGuy

just leave, don't announce it, no one cares

Just a bland character. I enjoyed the concept but I think it was poorly executed. Thanks for writing.

lmao random ccp msg

Dialogue is bad. I like the story premise a lot and it has been very interesting so far but the dialogue just feels juvenile and it does not feel like the author has grasped the fact that people can speak differently and often do.

His stare was creepy. Too creepy. I did not like his stares.