ReiAsteria
Author of The Seven Regalia series Twitter: https://twitter.com/REI_4STER14 Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/rei_asteria/ email: r4in3b3rn4b3@gmail.com
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ReiAsteria1yr発表The grammar, story-telling, and flow of the story are almost impeccable. Props to that, author! Some bits were awkwardly described here and there in the first chapters. Personally, the main characters' romantic development was a bit fast. Then again, this is a fast-paced story xD. Reading more, the writing does get better and better, the plot becomes more solid, and the interaction between the leading characters becomes more engaging. Very noice!
- ReiAsteria1yr発表
Okay, first of all, I am aware that this particular story is "fast-paced", however, the lack of descriptions and explanations about the story's events prevents the reader to be fully engrossed with the book. I will advise the author to study the "show, don't tell" technique if he plans to rewrite the story. Focusing on its positive aspects, the system seems to be interesting and the plot, although it can be a bit generic at times, seems to be planned nicely. I'm looking forward to the author's rewrite of this story and possibly be able to improve this review to a 5-star one ^^ Keep it up!
- ReiAsteria1yrに返信 MercuryDrone
That he is
Viktor slapped her hand and immediately sat up with his back against the wall. “Lay a hand on me again and you’ll be dead.” - ReiAsteria1yrに返信 MercuryDrone
Surely didn't let Kristen rest in peace tho xD
'So why are you here?' She could not help but think how much of a pushover Raegan is. Usually, she considered it nice when people do not give up easily but, in his case, it was rather problematic. “Well then, I apologize for not making it clear to you. Her Royal Highness does have work to do and I reckon that she does not want to meet her past lover.” - ReiAsteria1yrに返信 Lawrence_Oshim
Mercurius and Mercurian is derived from the name, Mercury, the Roman God of Trade and Commerce ^^
Fifteen years ago, the royal alchemist found her at an orphanage in Cicero, the capital of the Mercurian Empire, and took her under his care to be his apprentice. He taught Lilla the methods of Alchemy, hoping that one day she would inherit his title. The position was offered to her twelve years after as the alchemist stepped down and deemed her worthy of the seat at last. - ReiAsteria1yrに返信 RaychbunniCh 1 Vol 1 Ch 1: The Damned
- ReiAsteria1yrに返信 Lawrence_OshimCh 1 Vol 1 Ch 1: The Damned
- ReiAsteria1yr発表
I like how author wrote the mc, more space for developments :>. The story itself moves at a comfortable pace; not too slow, not too fast. I like how the characters interact with each other, Kali and Lucas as a duo seemed nice and comical. Minor nitpicks, some description regarding the setting was a bit awkward to me, but it isn't that much of a problem. I'll be looking forward to this book and Lucas' character development. Keep it going, author! ^^
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Aww poor dragon
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I mean... the door was open all along xD
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*yeets him off the planet*
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Kali to mc's mom: What's this trash? Don't you raise any of your sons better? :v
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old books, yes lovely aroma indeed
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seems like he didn't play enough dating sim games to know what to do in his first date
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somehow this reminded me of...
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Hahahaha forget horror, if this was he- *bonk*
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might be drugs as you thought earlier, dear xD
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