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He needs more time to settle (he gets better), but yes, somewhat trashy.

Not bad

Try limiting these comma heavy sentences. This one's fine but be aware of sentence variation for better readability.

bit of a weird progression. I thought he was losing XD

I actually can't imagine much of this. It's like they're out in a white field full of absolutely nothing

So much telling. The goblin blitzes (you can use a more appropriate action verb) in. Cassius blocks it. Crack! Searing Pain shots through as the crooked-needle-like teeth digs into his hard flesh. The pain distracts him momentarily, and the goblin strikes again, cleaving through his flesh with sharp claws/ Distracted, Cassius doesn't even see the goblin's claws coming.

reads poorly

So little sentence variation

Actually, consider separating these kinds of sentences. Relying on adjectives and adverbs is never a good idea

Missing commas