Joshua_Swan

starts out good, then constant ass pulls for tang san, author wants canon and doesnt care how deep he has to reach for it

poor author killed his own story just like many others, ps unless tang san or yu xiaogang die screaming in a chapter nobody will keep reading

well, he has to kill tang san now, yu xaiogang at minimum with tang san missing a limb

He'd also get every std on planetos

isn't this just a VERY slight, less trashy xiao yan? - he also has no reason to "worship" yao chen as a teacher, making his own techniques from jia academy would be easy, he's frankly just annoying - he stopped making busted af puppets, personal guards anyone? - he hasnt gone into formations? with his cheat that should have been a massive priority

hopefully he's not being paired with the communal bike.

The mc is braindead, the system asspulls often, got a little over a dozen chapters and couldn't deal with the stupid,mc is directionless as an irritating gag, he's always "alone" so there's nothing to offset the annoyance,his personality is luffy meets a goldfish,the update rate is good and it's perfectly legible, just personally found the mc nauseating

"they walked down a hall" end chapter

-suggestion- delete all the notice chapters