DragonPhoenix
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DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 Voidz_ZeroHe is only 15 right now let the dude grow up and learn his way around the world. Romance and his values will slowly be developed.
- DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 Mikedawg
Thanks! Been working on my writing, it should keep getting better as you read on. Of course by small margins.
- DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 Tommyshelby
Yes, I am thinking about this what do you have in mind?
- DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 omeroford
The first 15 chapters are edited! Try reading it now and let me know how it goes.
- DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 AsuraSaiyan
The first 15 chapters are edited! Try reading it now and let me know how it goes.
- DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 omeroford
Yeah, I stopped using that in the later chapters.
- DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 AsuraSaiyan
I noticed it and stopped doing that, will edit the previous chapters soon!
- DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 omeroford
Yes, I noticed this and I stop it in later chapters. I will go back and edit the previous chapters when I get some time.
- DragonPhoenix2 years agoに返信 Flowing_River_Core
When someone shows kindness to you, you show kindness to others!
- DragonPhoenix2 years ago発表
Keep up the good work. Looks like it has a lot of potentials. You don't come across good stories and good writing often.
