DaoistLeIg1u

Please for the love of the multiverse keep this story going it’s absolutely amazing

Seriously several chapters in the privileged section are repeats this is how you lose people from reading your work

Yo author you have got to fix this

Yeah this doesn’t really make sense with what’s going on as it could easily start to east the tension?

You should really have called this chapter something else especially if we aren’t learning what she did

Seriously way to be a tease

Overall a great story that is captivating and entertaining to read can’t wait for more

Well here is hoping you write a badass sequel and I’ll definitely have to check out any other works you have

I do understand completely still doesn’t help my impatience to read a great story lol

Please don’t drop this and continue writing I’m enthralled by your story 10-10 recommend reading