Ephraim_Williams

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

1100 chapters in and it keeps getting better and better. relatable, understandable characters, great story movement (never filling or going slow), real life issues, traumas, and moral dilemmas, and so much lore, fantasy, mythology, and sci-fi packed into one amazing story. I need the fully designed and curated hardback version of this book!!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I love how the last few chapters are giving us some character development instead of just non-stop action and killing. Don't get me wrong, this is one of the best books I have ever read, but I am enjoying the refreshing change of pace.

love this book. it has great characters, the story really develops with twists and turns, you can see the characters inside your head because of their descriptions, and trying to figure out the world is really fun. A great great great book

I am four chapters in, and here is my first impression. the writing quality definitely needs some help. The author would do well to research how point of view shifts happen naturally instead of labeling it. also try to get a couple editors. the story is being well-developed, following a similar plot of many other stories. there's a decent amount of background and character design in the first four chapters that allow us to get a good picture of things that are going around. Not the greatest, but definitely good for an ******* writer.

if this whole story is written well, it will follow a somewhat predictable beginning. the caregiver will die so the mc will find a mentor to train her.

ice catheter

great chapter

is she really in the past or is she in the future with much knowledge lost to time????