MY PAST WAS SO DARK THAT DOESN'T WANT TO REMEMBER ANYTHING! MY FUTURE IS SO FUZZY THAT UNABLE TO SEE ANYTHING! MY PRESENT IS SO CHAOTIC THAT UNABLE TO FEEL ANYTHING!!!
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Thanks for understanding brother 😁👍
Great Work! Overall Writing is good with no grammatical mistakes and smooth English sentences which are easy to understand, The plot is interesting and well written without any chaotic dialect which made this novel even more extraordinary so keep it up brother!
I'll try my best🙂
Thanks for your appreciation
Thanks brother no matter what you leave a bad review or good one I just appreciate it, I only wanted to tell you that I can't change the entire story just based on one request or even many requests otherwise it'll be messed up but once again thanks for your appreciation for my work and giving a good review, because I'm busy these days so can't upload new chapters but soon after 2-3 days I'll once again start to publish new chapters so please stay tuned.
Well it's not a big harem so it won't I can't disclose too much but that's all also the romance will develop slowly so it won't make the story bad or anything so please brother if you don't like this novel just doesn't give hate based on these tags if possible please avoid giving low reviews on the basis of these things thanks also I appreciate your opinion thanks for your review even it's not a good one
may I know why you want me to remove harem tag?
...Hey bro that's just because he hasn't used the system yet and just started to explore, also he's just a 16-year-old youngster so from that perspective it's not something extraordinary because if you know majority of the youngsters/teens are warm-blooded so that's why I wrote that line. Not from the perspective of System or he got Bei Xuan's memories, he'll use those things in future and same for his temperamental change I can not just let him become arrogant and used op techniques to deal with ordinary cultivators otherwise it'll ruin the taste of readers who prefer reading a good story without an arrogant male lead. Also brother it's my first novel so some mistakes I can't just help with so sorry for that and Thanks For Your Support @CHAND!
Thanks for showing your enthusiasm, I really appreciate it. Hope you like my work!
This novel is just like a play, a good concept keep it up buddy!