Commandant_Aeon

Lv14

2020-06-28 入りましたGlobal

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Commandant_Aeon14 days ago
に返信 Doctor_Blue
you do realize that it always was a gritty drama ?
Kano wasn't happy with Takuma taking work from someone other than her, and it took some convincing and a promise not to let it affect his ongoing and future cases. However, Takuma wasn't worried— he considered time management to be one of his strong points. He did more things on a daily basis than most people to know how to distribute his time to get things done.
Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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Commandant_Aeon14 days ago
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Now that it's framed like that and knowing what we do after that... it could be because his teacher was supposed to be Maruboshi but the third failed to convince him to finally take the promotion and become a Jonin Sensei.
As she looked at Takuma, Arisu couldn't help but remember the Takuma of the past when they were in the academy. Dead last. Someone who couldn't hit a target, win a spar, cast a jutsu, if his life depended on it. Someone who had failed the academy graduation test twice before passing at the last chance. Takuma hadn't even been given a chance to try out for a jonin and was directly put into the Genin Corp.
Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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Commandant_Aeon22 days ago
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Truly the world was unfair.
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
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Commandant_Aeon22 days ago
に返信 Commandant_Aeon
which also means that the Sandaime, could very well be the best Kage before the Yondaime.
"Such a shame how things turned out," Hiruzen sighed, "He was perhaps, the greatest prodigy that originated from this village, or at least close to it and could have rivalled the Yondaime given time, perhaps even surpassed him and all the Hokage that came before."
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
アニメ·コミックス · 0_Jordinio_0
Commandant_Aeon22 days ago
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Remember that cannonicaly the Yondaime was supposed to be the best Hokage (period) until Kishimoto ended up writing himself in a corner (one of many) and had to retcon it.
"Such a shame how things turned out," Hiruzen sighed, "He was perhaps, the greatest prodigy that originated from this village, or at least close to it and could have rivalled the Yondaime given time, perhaps even surpassed him and all the Hokage that came before."
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
アニメ·コミックス · 0_Jordinio_0
Commandant_Aeon22 days ago
に返信 _NorthStar_
he had remnant of an old Shota commission that someone ended up reporting.
Anyway, I would have got back to posting today, but my Pa--tr----eon got taken down. For those of you wanting to read ahead in my advanced chapters or support me, I've moved to Subscribestar, you can find me on there by typing in 0jordinio0 no spaces in the subscribestar search bar.
Pokemon: Jordinio Version
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Commandant_Aeona month ago
に返信 NaraSado
no, she did, she just refused to accept it.
But to Antilla, he had long become family, ever since she first saw him use the Bloodline. No, even before that, when he was in a disguised, she knew that they had a special bond.
HP: The Arcane Thief
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Commandant_Aeona month ago
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"I've already told you, it's not about the affinity. It's about the warrior, you basic bitch. Basically, even if your affinity is good, you're too shit at using it. It's like giving a race car to a wom— a beginner."
HP: The Arcane Thief
アニメ·コミックス · Snollygoster
Commandant_Aeona month ago
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This does not hit the same way now... O7
"My mother's dead you know, has been for over a decade," Daiki shook his head, the implication not even fazing him, "That says a lot about you, that your go to is banging a corpse."
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
アニメ·コミックス · 0_Jordinio_0
Commandant_Aeona month ago
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'I should have….6,967…just kept my mouth shut…6,968…but the guy just pisses me off…6,969, heh, nice.' he mused inwardly as he went through one handed, hand stand push ups.
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
アニメ·コミックス · 0_Jordinio_0

Harry Potter and the Thaumaturge's Influence

Thomas C Preacher is a first generation wizard born in 1959, went to school at Hogwarts and finished his studies with the the best grades he could muster. When he got out of school he decided to divine his next decisions, which led him to marry Elyse Beaumont a French first generation witch and still following his divination he finally interfered in Albus Dumbledore's plan to groom Harry to be the martyr that vanquished Tom M Riddle. The story begins in the Preacher small manor, as Thomas is now a renowned author and talented Thaumaturge. He made quite the fortune and is educating Harry to be one of the most powerful wizards of his time, and Harry being a bright young man that love to learn as much as he love to practice any physical activity. What can happen now that the story derailed ? This is an AU, the MC is NOT reincarnated and I'll try to change all that I believe is daft which means that I'll take fanon elements that I judge logic and sound while refusing those that are not, the same goes with canon elements as Rowling has made a lot of mistake and took a lot of bad decisions. There will be errors, please point them as this is as much of a writing training as it is a learning exercise for me as I'm not a native English speaker. Also I'll add new chapter when I feel like writing, I'll try to write as much as possible but I cannot in good conscience promise anything.

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