Wilder6

Not a fan of original female leads in these kinds of story’s, there are so many celebrities to choose from it’s a waste to choose an original FL

Cliché

It seems your going the sports star route. I like the movie actor or director route mainly so I’m out, good luck

Is this a reincarnation or an SI?

I think it’s time to remind the little mouse who he really is

I’ve just been skipping through chapters to see where the visions would give him an edge but found nothing, I guess your going for a slow build up to take back his homeland and then maybe Rome, but realistically without future knowledge or a genius mind like Alexander your going to need to add a lot of luck and plot armor to this which is a bit boring, so I’m going to drop here cuz I either I still don’t get the plot or I do and it’s a bit stale. If you add future knowledge kingdom building later on lmk, it doesn’t have to be guns and steam engines but better farming, steel, and alcohol, or waterwheels, glass, horse stirrups. Either way all the best

Don’t know what’s going on with the plot, what was the whole point of going to Spain, why not anywhere else

I just don’t understand how he plot, what are the dreams and treasure? If your going for mysterious plot, it just makes it more confusing and doesn’t make it to much more interesting, so if mystery is the plot it’s not worth it. Is this an SI, reincarnation, future visions? What is the plot?

Would love to hear one of there pov’s on how they catch a serial killer