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devianttk

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2020-06-07 入りましたRussia
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  • devianttk
    devianttk2 years ago
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    Thank you for the chapter!

  • devianttk
    devianttk2 years ago
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    I like it. Author, we'll support you. Don't give up! Just continue and everything will be 😉🤞🌟

  • devianttk
    devianttk3 years ago
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    Heeey, please, tell me that there will not be any misunderstandings and something like this! I wish they'll meet each other. And don't disappear for a month again!

  • devianttk
    devianttk4 years ago
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    Plot is good, and I like the idea. Translation is amazing, better than other author's novels. Characters are cute, especially Xiao Bei and Xiao Wu. Finally, I can say I'll continue reading it, just write and we'll support!

  • devianttk
    devianttk4 years ago
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    This was very nice, because Nikolai used to hate Mona, but now he admits that he loves her. My question is, how will he react when he finds out that Neoma died twice and that Gavin was her father in her second life? Would he be angry or jealous? And who will Neoma choose? I, personally, prefer Trevor, both in age and in character, more suitable than a juvenile bodyguard, or a tacit-strange chef. Either that, or the Duke, but he's more suited to the role of a minor character, even a third-rate one. Soooo exciting, the future plot is so inviting, ah, I can't wait!

  • devianttk
    devianttk4 years ago
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    This story is very fantastic like the first part "palpate my heart" Hmmm,I think you will be my favourite author. I really like your novels,their plot are amazing and your qrammatic is very good. And leaders(both of them) are very cuteee,especially FL. Just continue,author

  • devianttk
    devianttk4 years ago
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    This is my honest opinion based on what I readI confess that I really liked this story. I don't know the other reader's opinion,so it is just my own ricencse. The plot develops gradually and smoothly. The characters are not bad, but there are no stories of other characters besides the main characters, and this is upsetting. In general, I did not see grammatical errors, and the sentences were logically well formulated. If we talk about the heroes themselves, then they are just cute, but I would like everything to develop a little faster, but not too much. And last but not least, the speed of chapter release. I see the last chapter was posted 3 months ago. I hope you haven't forgotten, because this is one of the quality, good novels that I have been hard to find lately. It is better to post chapters regularly, it will be convenient for you and it will be pleasant for us, the readers. Go ahead confidently and write!(to you,author :D) And for those who are looking closely at this novel, but do not dare to read it, I definitely advise it to you!