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Demonic transformation Pyro element 2

Demonic transformation Pyro element

To be honest, your story has potential, my friend, but I would advise you to develop the character and adapt his powers or abilities to the world of Genshin Impact. (What you are doing, I liked the integration of Tayden and Albedo) The way he can acquire elements is good, by devouring or eating enemies that are attuned to the elements that are in Teyvat (or substances that have high amounts of energies, elementals, sometimes as an abyss mage or an abyss emissary) and thus gradually acquire elemental powers. Also a way for him to store the elements, Tayden can create a special organ (like Muzan literally did, the guy had 7 hearts and 5 brains to be stronger) in his body where he stores all the elements (energy of the elements, in his case he could create individual organs for each element, ha, ha, ha, I imagine Tayden exploding by mistake by combining Pyro and Electro into a single organ). So Tayden would have to study with Albedo to learn as much as possible. Anemo Elemental Demon Transformation

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Good intriguing start, I also like the writing and how things develop, I look forward to seeing what the synopsis says and it has good potential.

The images were removed, but what I want to tell you is that your story is good and entertaining, I recommend you make a status sheet for Grey describing his appearance, hair color, eye color, height, skin, facial features and initial equipment (which is updated for each arc or volume of the story) and an image to better visualize it for the MC.

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Light and darkness

The beast, the MC and the light is Bell and the monster is the One-Eyed Black Dragon.