Fabio_De_SouzaJR

The story is very good, well written and captivating that keeps you hooked, however something extremely irritating is how little development per chapter there is, practically nothing happens in 1 chapter, it takes several chapters for the story to move forward, some chapters are enough to summarize in 1 paragraph. There were chapters where the protagonist sat down to eat in the last chapter and is still sitting in this one, another entire chapter was just to say that Sunny is the brother of one of the protagonist's teammates but he lost the position of family leader to his brother for being too coward, that's all for an entire chapter. The story is very good but the author needs to start reducing the interior and redundant monologues to make the story move.

25 chapters to simply repeat what is already summarized in the synopsis. In general, if you have already read the synopsis, you can start reading with chapter 26.

Through the initial chapters it seems that the concept of authority in this work is completely null. A simple son of some marquis has the courage to kill the person who is accompanying the princess in front of the princess, a dog shitting and the princess of this kingdom is the same thing, no one respects it. So you think maybe it's because she's young, but then they arrives at the academy and every time someone tries to disrespect or even kill the dean's only student, a rank 8 wizard, in front of the dean as if the dean were air. Just when the dean gets angry do they suddenly remember that the dean is a rank 8 wizard and are left shaking with fear. It doesn't make any sense, nobody respects anything in this story.

Great work! Please continue the novel. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

An idea. Why did the protagonists with little destiny stop appearing? Could you put a system for him to be able to kill the protagonists without any problem if our MC's destiny is 2 or 3x greater than the protagonists Or he can welcome this protagonist as his subordinate and thus absorb his destiny points just like he did with the heroines.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Finally we'll go back to how history used to be. Author don't let the snu snu get repetitive like it was in this arc, when it's a woman he's done it with before, just describe the beginning of the scene and then jump to the MC waking up or just describe how many hours they did the "exercise".

One of the best urban novels I've ever read. A very good story with a bit of snusnu, just avoid repeating the hiroto arc where it had no story and was pure snusnu Keep up the good work author.

Very good story. I highly recommend, only the interaction with the 4th wall was annoying. . .................................

When more chapters come out ?