Diamond_Hacks

Im starting to think you wrote the actual show, Keep it up (Im on chapter 22). Although some complaints about how you went about your character are slightly justified I all in all don't mind, there just basically going about it a different way than you came up with.

The comment section when they see viktor (me as well).

I'll do something close to that

I would say something about this but its too well written for me to bad mouth

That would have bee cool if he wasn't ginger xd

The grammar is al I have to say, I read to chapter 4 btw. It's alright if not sloppy due to the writers lack of knowledge in areas that don't regard the show itself.

did you guys not read it he was six last chapter with a 4 year timeskip he should be 10

His ship isn't really being messed with it's just being used how it usually is. The show doesn't provide me any evidence to say he'd notice tampering if there was any on his ship but for the stuff being stolen out of his lab that will be addressed, the only thing he's really took was the freeze ray and laser box which rick typically doesn't use so he will notice just again not so soon.

Lee was that guy in the telltale games, idk what your talking about.

Np! thanks for the suggestion, I haven't read broken peridot yet but I do plan to in a couple days