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great story, nice and fleshed out, and can easily see the future of the story.

great writing, maybe a little too much wish fulfilling, but the story is still going. I hope it doesn't fissile out and become abandoned like most.

great book unique story with interesting take on characters, make you really think of the world differently.

Great translation or .aybe a really good book, but it shows how well the translation is when I can't tell.

I was just about to delete the old one until I saw the update. I'm really excited about this one, so keep up the good work.

don't know much bout this show but maybe think about just making an au crossover verse with shows like mighty med, lab rats that are connected.

understandable

I really like this one very nice start. Feels a little unreasonable, but it has gods. Wonder how he'll interact with the cast and a little more shown of the powerscale compared to original.

great chill story that just lets you enjoy the mc and situation of it all as well as nice long chapters while being easy to read.

Great potential and story only small critique is the passing, but that honestly is really negligible and probably solved with more background. I just don't want you going to high that there's nowhere to go by chap60 or something. I'm probably overthinking. I don't want a good book to burn out or something.

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what does Peggy sue mean?

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for the next day no fish

thanks for telling us, but don't force yourself and burn out. Take a small break and enjoy your food.

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great story, really engrossed in it need more chapters.

Great pokemon fiction. basic premise but solid and entertaining story that I enjoy reading with no mistakes that I can notice or effects my read.