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Author, no offense (feel like i get that one out there before proceeding) but I've gotta ask; is this wish fulfillment? Great idea for your book but that's the issue I've got really; you didn't develop the idea properly. Even in wish fulfillment, the only people that like it when a reincarnated person with meta knowledge has sooo many abilities he barely uses any of them are those who just started reading comics or manga or watching anime. Please this is just good old honest advice. I apologize if I've hurt your feelings but you have to understand, you set out to tell a story(that's what anyone who sees your book in the webnovel database would think (unless you choose to say in your synopsis that your book barely has any plot because you're focusing on collecting powers or girls or even writing smut) so please provide a story with an introduction, the rising action, conflict, resolution and conclusion and please don't do what a lot of writers here do when they unnecessarily speed up various parts of the book or leave others out all together. it's a story. A reflection of actual life no matter how exaggerated it outlandish it may seem, so long as it's relatable. Why do you think stories like misfit at demon high didn't stick like Jujutsu kaisen despite their similarly overpowered mcs
Gratuitous...😅. Sorry but that made me laugh a little bit; seeing how serious everyone was but you were all like gratuitous... Anyways, Malefic, bro( or sis) dude chill. We all know only those who can do better have the slightest right to berate others to do better ( and you were not even berating, you're straight up bullying.) Write a novel, a fic, anything of literary worth that's gonna knock me off my feet, then you're good.
Thank you dude! 😊. Please don't break any speed limits not risk your life though.
dude like could I please borrow this passive skill and this sentence ???PLEASE🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 For deals tho. I want this gold dust
yes to hero. So done with the village and selfish tropes cause being loyal to yourself and only your close ones is selfish as opposed to being selfless and caring about everyone around you. I mean imagine if captain America decide to only care about himself and peggy near the end of the first cap. America movie. a while lot of bad stuff would have occurred .
I think its basically been said at this point. the characters feel like hollow husks( I apologize ) but this was to be expected( at least for me) you seemed like a new writer so I expected you to eventually grow into writing characters that are actually in tune with the original version you're writing a fabric about without rushing the story or putting too much importance on one guy ( your mc ) that you consciously or unconsciously delineate everyone into background characters incapable of doing even stuff we've seen them easily do in the comics or movies
it would be so much easier to kill these villains especially villains like The Joker and Lex Luthor and honestly I feel so strongly against them that I am tempted to agree for severe cases such as those but then you would imply that they should be judges juries and executioners for the world. that is what you're saying but then we compla8nband take batman's side ( the majority of us) in injustice for example. we bash on wonder woman for whatever role she played but have any if us really tried to put ourselves in their metaphorical shoes? how hard it is to make the decisions and call the shots when you're the one everyone looks up to as the leader of some sort. these guys are looked up to by the whole world! superman is looked up to by both the super and civilian community as the benchmark of what a GOOD person is. imagine being that with all that power. hearing so much since your abilities kicked in till now. Yeah, they are characters in a story but just try to understand their lives like they were people. maybe after considering these you wouldn't make such a decision easily
I dont recall that ever happening but you seem to be referencing those with extremis working to kill/kidnap him/his family forcibly. if you are then they also did take the situation out of his hands in the heat of it as he couldn't put them down l9ng enough for it to count (mostly). though I haven't watched that movie in quite a while so till someone posts a reference video,gif or what have you ,I think we should leave it at that
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umm,dude,I think it's cosmic armour superman...though I think his max in marvel would be multiversal entities but not the oaa nor the fulcrum,not even the dreaming celestial(after it became the fulcrum equal)