do something to separate the Galahad's as it is kind of confusing to read with the two of them being referred to as the same name and example of how to differentiate then would be, Galahad(MC) and Galahad(SDS)

I quit after chapter 3. I am confused is there a 1st book i am missing. The book gives no background at all. it just throws you in without even knowing who the main character is. just immediately to a the story with no context.

i have 3 major problems with this story. 1.) The chapters are short and most are just the author rambling on and never getting the point across 2.) The character has the power and personality of all of his elder scroll saves yet sheogorath is the main personality(would be fine if he actually used sheogorath personality and not just tell the story from an outside perspective without any of sheogoraths thoughts.) 3.)The pacing for this story is all over the place.

keep up with the chapters