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Robijoe

Robijoe

Lv15
2020-05-08 入りましたGlobal
928.5h

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  • Robijoe
    Robijoea year ago
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    This is a Transmigration novel that stops being one after the first chapter. There is no link to him being from another world. Might as well call it a "I suddenly forgot my youth and have a system" kind of story.The plot armor is indestructible. In some other novel, the main character starts with an overpowered thing that we all know is present. Its capabilities are defined and there is no surprise if it can do a thing. It is also not omnipotent. In this novel, the character always has things magically work out for him. Either a previous random item now seem to be able to fix the situation, or the next pebble he finds is enchanted with "Fix this unique problem". There is no sense of challenge in anything he does.Now that story wise is done, well translation/writing needs improvement. Some things make no sense and break the immersion. The weird switch between Metric and Imperial units also create weird comparison. Have you ever seen the 300 foot tall monster fight the 10 meters tall warrior over 40 Miles away? A nice sight from inside the City...Read Half of the released chapter, will be stopping spending money here.

  • Robijoe
    Robijoe4 years ago
    発表

    I like it enough to pay for it instead of looking elsewhere to read it. Isn't that enough proof of how good it is? In more details, Writing Quality: The translation is pretty good, there are a few errors here and there but nothing major. Story Dev: If you like this type of "Isekai" otherworld stories there is nothing to be afraid of. The story seems pretty straightforward with tiny holes that seem forgotten. Character: If it's an important one it will be detailed, you might get to know what he eats for breakfast. But generally you hear about it once and you should know it enough to understand him. The number of female is extremely low. Wonder why. World Background: We get to know what is happening now, and in the past. Everything that lacks explanation gets an answer when you really need it.