every fisherman needs a story like that tho

hmm this is really strange. on one hand the avrage player doesn't know the legend reputation requirements for advancing to legendary stats and above. so its understandable that the avrage high tankers don't waste their time on these things. but wouldn't the above and peak high tankers know about this? hard to say. it's just strange with the "back country" mc knowing more then people from mid level to high level cities

shhh he doesn't know that was wolfy xD

you mean the one he already reported on?

good girl. thinking of things karl isn't thinking about

oh that is so evil. chain lightning on a arrow.

the story is rather interesting it starts off rather slow and steady to explain the world and how the system works. it also begins the base of which the main character will grow from. building a cooperation to start a financial development plan. for example. the negative. the chapters are relatively long, and have some very slight errors. I'm not going to pick them out or dock points as obviously I do them too. and the characters see to have only a basic framework of a personality, sometimes it's their other times not so much. lastly it's locked chapters. I can't recommend it to readers who can't afford coins in moderate supply. as the average cost for chapters is around 18 coins. some are 15 at the lowest and others are up to 23. if your not aware how WN works that's the price for 2xFP to unlock, and there is about 5 chapters within the first 25 locked chapters that are " ***do not unlock*** " for one reason or another. thus it has a good start, I personality recommend a re write, to shorten chapters and post the story in a more controlled manner and more affordable to the free readers. even if that means dabbling the chapter count.

I mean this is fair. but not even describing it here? kinda takes away from the story if we need to close the app open discord and scroll through all the posts to find one image without being spoiled for future events too.....

this is kinda funny ngl. it can almost be farmed too. however it would need to be a new race every time. and its hard to make something that hasn't existed before.

bye-bye. I posted this not as a negative view or trying for attention. it was mostly to leave my own "review" without actually leaving a review. like I said the story is probably good, but just not somthing I'll enjoy. after spending so many years on this app some stories I just can't read anymore as I've see just too many plots and twists.

I hope you read mage and wolf because it wasn't the laughing God that gods hated. and I'll leave it at that. they juat disliked him because he hijacked their system. he also has a different name that explains why he was able to do that too.

I thought his hp looked a little too low. turns out he's has got a few cards up his sleeve yo make up for the fact......

I think this is what we would call the unavoidable damage that some bosses have. like when you dodge the attack but it still has ground effects or other problems. by a technicality he did it with "no hits taken"

on a school bus? man how lucky are you. getting a seat to yourself is so much more comfortable then sharing a seat. (if it's the typical big yellow school bus form the USA that is)

oh, I can see where this is going. especially from the synopsis. but I do find this story funny and refreshing from some of the others I've read. so I rely can't wait to see this backfire xD

sounds like the mobile game markets current situation.....