Thank you for the criticism! If possible, could you give me pointers on how I could improve in that aspect? Or perhaps recommend me some novels that are great in that way, so I could learn from them? I’m writing for fun, so my first story is most likely lacking in many ways. I’d like to learn more on this, if I can. Ah, but if it’s too much trouble for you, it’s fine if you don’t reply. I’ll take this into account and learn more before updating the next chapter, though I’m not sure if I can improve on that so quickly. I might rewrite this whole story once I’m done and I’ll probably put what you said in my mind more to make this story better. Umm, anyways, thank you for the feedback! Have a great day ahead🤗 Stay safe and healthy!

I updated the book! Your words mean a lot to me, it’s really nice to have such understanding readers☺️ Thank you, and I hope you’ll enjoy the chapters!🤗

Thank you! I’m really grateful that there are still readers who are staying despite this. I think I might update at least one chapter this week... Just a little something as thanks😊

Thank you!🤗

Again, thank you for reading and commenting! Having someone thank you for the chapter is a great source of motivation, so thank you☺️

Thank you! It was quite rushed since I wanted to keep the promise of 4-5 chapters this week since I missed the quota of three chapters last week so I’m not sure if the quality’s good enough, but I hoped you liked it. Thanks for reading🤗

Thank you for reading☺️

Thanks for reading! I’m glad you like it😊

I’m sorry that it was short😭 I’ll try harder to lengthen my chapters, if I can. I’m glad you said that it was nice though! Thanks for reading☺️ I also believe that Evin can trust her family and she will, don’t worry! And umm, I don’t really have any other way of contact— I don’t use social media much since I can’t really keep up with interactions and stuff, so those apps are just forgotten by me😅😭 I’m really glad that you’ve stayed till this chapter, I’m also thankful to the other readers who have done the same. Thank you, Fulminare😊

Thank you! I’m glad that it was a good chapter for you☺️ Thanks for reading! I hope that your own story is going well! Let’s keep up the good work together🤗

Yup! Let’s continue working hard💪🏼

I won’t stop writing, I really want to try finishing this story of mine😊 Thank you so much for your encouragement! Honestly though, I’m just grateful that there’s people who read my story. Having a few people supporting me feels great already, so I’ll just do what I can to hopefully not disappoint you! Thanks for reading my story☺️🙏🏼

Thank you! I really should be the one thanking you more because your comments make me more motivated to write as well☺️ And of course I’ll try reading your story! Please tell me when you publish it😆

Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it😊

Thanks for reading☺️

Wow... You just gave a whole idea for a storyline😆 Sadly, that’s not the case here though😅😓 I’ll publish the next chapter in a few hours!

Thank YOU for reading the story! I’m glad that it could make you speechless, and hopefully it was interesting enough😅

Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it🤗

Oh! I really must have been too sensitive, I’m sorry for that😅 Thank you for your praise, though I think that I have lots to improve regarding this story. And don’t worry, it’s not taboo to say that you don’t like cheesecakes; we all have our own tastes and preferences🤗 Honestly though, I might just keep her last name as “Carne” because I really like the sound of it although it actually means meat😭😭😭 Still, thank you, really, for making me aware of that definition. The next time I write a story, I’ll make sure to search the meanings of any names! Thank you for reading this story!☺️

? Okay, umm, sorry. I personally like cheesecakes though😅 I guess that I may be repetitive with many things in this story, I’m really sorry for that. Thank you for making me aware about this though🤗 And I’m sorry if you don’t like the story so far because of my amateurish (my words, not yours, don’t worry) writing. If, by chance, you don’t like it so far, it’s fine if you stop reading. But if you do continue, then please continue to comment and make me realise what things you’re uncomfortable or iffy with so I can make a few tweaks to my future chapters. Have a nice day!