That was a diffrent story! but yeah it was fantastic

so far I've seen the first chapter. They were both awkward from the start and they love rainy days which I also do and they 2 years convo about fantasy world... imy gonna continue to read...

my dad woulda killed me if I walked out on him

He's in trouble

broke the man's jaw...not cool Marcus

This chapter revealed a lot of things. 1. Jason and Jennifer's family has a tie. 2. Jason always trying to protect Marcus because Marcus helped him from Jennifer or her family but if Jennifer is such a bad person why did he let her introduce her to Marcus? 3. They talked about dirty stuff? I hope that in the next chapter, you will reveal more things. I like the story... 4. Jennifer lost a family member.

I've seen all the chapters and when it comes to the writing style, I can't judge it nor point out the mistake but all I care about is the storyline and I like the fact that you are showing everyone's personal life and stuff like that and if you continue this story, I'll be your number one fan.

Jenna

it's ur first time... ok I won't be harsh

I really love it, the style but just add more creativity to it

tbh it's great, I think his girlfriend is right ppl should do what they want

Great I like the style..just don't drop it