Zachary_Young

How then -----> Now then

No hate you do a very good job, but it's so she was telling the truth after all, not after all, so she was telling the truth

stay in own world ----> stay in her own world

elves, high elves --> elves and high elves

and he was the one to tell her Eve was Eve

Please come back or at least tell us how long you will be focusing on your other books I love this book and it is probably one of if not my favorite book on this app

I believe you mentioned scar and also he's a water mage he just uses ice more so he will most likely use water not ice

I can understand where you're coming from but I don't believe you're entirely correct as muscle alone does not provide much resistance compared to armor while yes covering yourself in something a blade cannot grip onto would be best you can't do that while you're in a suit like this one as it would most likely lose its physically empowering properties for the user and you would basically just be punching normally just with a lot of gelatin covering your arms

Amazing story gghhghhgddtresdghsjejjrhtjtkrkjdjrjrjrjh5jrkkjehjejei3838u5j58jtj5jtkfi8dudjejjejejjrjrjrjjrj*jurjjrjrju3i3jejjrjjrjtkjroo4k4kej3j

Great story the world building is great and the writing quality is good too I just wish that that the author would post more often and a bit more consistently