Fletcher_Isakson

Generally speaking I give these fics the benefit of the doubt then read them even though they have bad reviews and sometimes you can find a gem or two that just gets heated on for no reason but this is not one of those starts off with a good cool premise the second I read that he can let other people read his grimoire immediately pushed down my optimism for this constant wasted opportunity the second he actually finished the test to become a doctor the tester wanted to marry her daughter to him and she does so by forcing him so I decided to drop the fic for that but I just read the next chapter cuz I already had it loaded then it proceeds to waste the rest of the intrigue I had for the novel prestige to show him that he apparently absolutely humiliated himself because he got drunk and so everyone in the Black Bull it basically bullying him over it which was the only reason why I'm writing this review

I know for a fact I've read this mtl somewhere with 200 plus chapters I just don't remember the name and where I read it I mean it was pretty goodhis is actually pretty well written better than the last one I read it doesn't have a lot of nationalism or racism like a lot of other ones have so it's pretty decent in my eyes

What do you mean out of nowhere 99% of these fanfics have overpowered main characters regardless and this one at least has a bit of lead up to the point before he gets really powerful at least compared to a lot of them that start off extremely op from the start

It's pretty good in the beginning whenever the author started adding in more and more other franchises and movies into the story he got really annoying cuz I feel like he was delaying the marvel plot and that's literally the only reason why I'm reading this fanfic nothing wrong with teenage mutant Ninja turtles or the transformer series but when I'm reading this it feels like I'm just wasting my time instead of reading something actually entertaining

Writing quality is okay story's pretty decent but one of my pet peeves that I don't really like seeing is characters getting gender bent for literally no reason other than the main character or the author is horny so the second I read about to go was a female I pretty much just dropped the fic

This fic had potential but the main problem I have with it is that the POV keeps going all over the place never actually focusing on the main character but like one in three chapters the POV also jumps to the future without any explanation and basically tells us what's going to happen without giving us any explanations on why it happened then it backs tracks where it should have just started to begin with so in the in the story the jumble of different povs of the main character and other characters that a lot of times don't make sense until five chapters later it'd be fine if this was like a one or two times thing but it's all throughout the fanfic and it's just annoying

Honestly speaking this is a pretty good fic overall the translating forties pretty much one of the best I've seen so far the main character is pretty smart in comparison to a lot of other similar fics that's a plus but one of the main problems I'm not giving it full marks is that it gets one of my pet peeves of the main character hiding his abilities for little to no reason and in the beginning I can kind of understand because he's not powerful enough yet but once you hit a certain point you might as well just show off your power cuz no one can stop you at that point in time but no he continues to hide it

Why in the hell are you going to write a story where the main character gets reincarnated into a magic world with the gun system whenever everyone else has guns as well you be better off making it a magic system cuz the main character already is proficient in guns I'm pretty sure the story is well written it's just so misleading with the title that I couldn't get past chapter 5 I gave up

Honestly speaking this is amazing it has scratched and itch I've had for a long time about wanting a medieval fantasy i but with guns right off the bat

I personally hate system FanFictions it makes the main character to overpowered way too fast then all the comments complain about it and then he gets nerfed and at that point there's no point for him being overpowered and the reason why I hate this in particular is because it's a crossover between basically a lot of different anime series that was never told about until it just pops up out of nowhere which is one of the most infuriating things plus the grammar is not very good