Is this a Chinese translation or did you get the idea from a Chinese story? The story is super bad, the protagonist is a Sasuke, an emo who spends his time simply obsessed with power, almost the entire story is about him training.

Well, the translation is pretty bad, it's hard to follow the narrative, the protagonist is as flat as possible, just a random guy who wants power and a big part of the story is him training and showing off his power.

If the law that part appears in the first chapter, I mean that the protagonist changes some important event, has a romance with a character, the story changes or it will be all the sagas and events of the anime.

Actually, you're right, I only read about 20 chapters. You can give spoilers to see if I'm wrong and it's worth it.

good luck with your story, I recommend reading other fics since they all repeat the same formula so you can get an idea and don't do it

I don't see any use for the system other than functioning as a female contact, it hasn't done anything that couldn't be done without it. I hope you can balance the power, remember if the protagonist is very strong you have to make him charismatic. Don't nerf him, you have to find a way to prevent him from being present or give him an opponent equal to his power.

here we go again

Until now the system has explained everything that is explained in that world, what useless garbage.

What is the need for a system? Explain with numbers that you are strong, words exist too

This is not funny, neither history nor logic, a piece has been transmitted for 20 years, they could not respect a little of the history that has already been formed.

This story is absurd, I don't understand what the point of all this is to give away crazy powers and that's it?

I tried to do it but this story is very bad, first of all a lot of Chinese idioms, the protagonist can steal powers and give them to whoever the protagonist is, he has no charisma or objective that interests you in his trip out of the world. The fact that he loves all women and the worst of all is that he is not alone, there are many other reincarnated people who are just there to get slapped.

Of course it's not like the rest of the stories, they haven't used it.

My goodness, what were the chances? Thank goodness I didn't read the title or I was a spoiler.

Is there any story that doesn't have Nami as the main girl?

The worst world is the dungeons since they are very boring.

It's not bad for your first fic, but it still has a long way to go. First of all, everything you do is already sufficiently exploited, so you have to make the protagonist more charismatic or at least control his mood swings.