Ishaan_raj

The story is good but the female character development is worse, they are like bitches in heat. There is no any reason which show why a female character likes him. They meet and start to do sex. If you read one sex scenario then you can skip all sex scenarios because everything is pretty much the same in all scenes. Except to this forced Harem development other things are good.

(I read up to chapter 34 before giving this review) The story is good but the way it is told is very boring, I know the background develoment is necessary but the way it is told is boring. It's like i am reading some theory of some type. Very few interactions between characters. The character is doing nothing All things are done by AI That's why it's too boring to read.

their items weren't destroyed in that attack?

I don't know it is copied novel or not but it is good story. i read it as a novel with mixed of many stories, all capture girl story as a seperate story. and it was fun. thanks for it author

good story until now i read it without break it is good great potential let see what will happen later

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To author your story line is great but please don't repeat same scenes (he know about hidden quest then he went there and kill all enemy and got experience) This is all in this novel until now, Plz add some scenes of protagonist personal life his history and situations in real life he always play games 24 hrs with same plot repeatedly didn't do anything else And that girl flowing him blindly without asking anything, come on it is believable at some point but, she is following this long

This is very good story you will feel emotions. Ya he gets everything from system but you will not feel boring like other manga It's not like other manga where, it is like they started to tell story in 4x speed hero went there and get this and done this that's why get this.... This is medium pace story with beautiful plot There is comedy also love and bickering between siblings you will love it ❤️❤️❤️❤️ (later might it will change but i think you it is story and you should look at it author or protagonist POV not your POV some says that love in siblings is disgusting and all. I know but here author tried to tell defferent story what all of you want same story all the time, as you know protagonist also feels that its wrong but you know heart don't know wrong and right in love if it fell then it fell. well this is my opinion and you have yours i am not criticizing anyone i am writing my opinion) Until now (ch-134) i Don't know it is harem or not but if it will harem then it will not be like other who pick girls like stones (like, helped a girl and she is in love with you and you fucked her) Artist is good i also love drawing, (thanks for this beautiful drawing may god help you with your career and also author is working hard specially writing every song and the funny moments 🤣🤣🤣 you put smile on many faces thanks for that, you will get what you deserve...😇

protagonist get system which help him to find rich people (specially female) who needed help and also give him items by which protagonist help all the females (like magic goggles for blind and serum which can cure any disease) and they owed him one everytime Main plot Step 1- Every female meet irritating man step 2- thet man saw her with protagonist step 3- then they try to kill him step 4- protagonist is powerfull no one can defeat him so he kills them all These steps are repeated until all the way to 300+ chapter Harem and no 18+ scene

it's like author made frame of story then started writing and connecting plots forcely you will not see any emotions, if you want power mc who only go and defeat villains in one strike an pick up girls like picking stones then its for you i read chapter upto 71