MagneBP666
I seek to transform my wild imagination into a book for your enjoyment. ^.^
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MagneBP6662 years ago発表Definitely a good read, the descriptions are on point and never gets boring to read. The story isn't dull at all and quite intriguing! Good job!
- MagneBP6662 years agoコメント
Wow, the chapter is so well described and it never really gets boring! I'll definitely keep reading
- MagneBP6664 years agoに返信 NightWind
Ability orbs cost money ^^
- MagneBP6664 years ago発表
The book is intriguing and immersive from the start! It gives off a good vibe and you could easily spend the entire day reading it. I would say that if you like the tags, you should really read it!
- MagneBP6664 years ago発表
Writing could use some check... but other than that, the story has a good flow and interesting plot! At last I would suggest you reading it if you like the tags :)
- MagneBP6664 years ago発表
I'm confused as to the writing... It has mistakes here and there but nothing that makes it unreadable or the sorts, but despite that, the author still describes and immerses the reader successfully!
- MagneBP6664 years ago発表
Okay... so the only reason it's not a 5-star review is because the chaps are so short, I am unaware about whether the newer chapters are longer or the same but 500 words per chap are just too short for me. WITH THAT BEING SAID! This novel is wonderful quality! The Author does a great job at describing, and it's easy to follow what is happening! You should read if you like the tags!
- MagneBP6664 years ago発表
The quality of the writing is very good, and there are no grammatical flaws that annoys you when you read. The only thing that could be done better is the stability of updates. I know the chapters are long but maybe cut them down and update more ^^
- MagneBP6664 years ago発表
The author's own style of writing is fantastic and really immersive! It is a bit fast-paced at the start but I find that really well working as you quickly get introduced to the new world! Totally a must read
