Paget
Gay guy that loves the fantasy genre. Love things with a system ,weak to strong and intelligent leads :)
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Paget2 years agoコメントthis is super good. looking forward to more ^_^
- Paget2 years agoコメント
die down. dye is hair dye
- Paget2 years agoコメント
it's good keep up the good work dude!
- Paget2 years agoコメント
Great as always ^_^
- Paget2 years ago発表
This is pretty well written. I only noticed a few spelling errors here and there . The characters are interesting and none seem one dimensional. Similar vibes to my vampire system but with better pacing. Looking forward to more!
- Paget2 years agoコメント
pretty good so far. minor spelling mistakes but good. little similar to my vampire system though
- Paget3 years agoに返信 Sword_immortal1
no problem at all. need more chapters ^_^
- Paget3 years ago発表
this is very well written the MC is nicely thought out. the other characters don't seem as good you me though. great work though REALLY eager to read more of this!
- Paget3 years ago発表
I really like the pacing of this. The MC is smart and lucky. but the luck doesn't feel like plot armour. I wish it updated more often and the side characters had a bit more feel to them. good job ^_^
- Paget3 years ago発表
It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.