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Dave_Guest1mthコメントI think with the new series ATLA would be nice. And then expand to Korra. You can make the series a little more serious.
So yes the original story is coming eventually, after Horizon, and most likely one other fanfic is done. (Either ATLA, Korra, Or Fairy Tail, still undecided so feel free to let me know what you'd like)- Dave_Guest5mthコメント
Try purple
Valeria Richards(Pics) - Dave_Guest5mthコメント
Ultramarines?
"Black Templars." - Dave_Guest6mthコメント
I wouldn’t create too many serums or add any more powers to the Mc. I would try to destroy the negatives of the vampirism. If you add any of those OP Serums or anything like that it will ruin the mood of twilight. And the MC can already grow his advantages without all the tinkering.
(a/n: comment some other serum/improvements the mc could make, I don't remember a lot of them. It doesn't matter what fiction it's from, I'll look into any suggestion and go from there.) - Dave_Guest6mthコメント
Will his eye grwo back?
Grisha's face was shaky now, his imminent fear rising. No, not because of the Founder Titan's words but because of the person behind him in a jacket... Whose eye was glowing in purple unmitigated rage. - Dave_Guest7mthコメント
I would have chosen the mother.
Jake thought about it. He could pick Luke, Anakin, Revan, and Yoda. But as he thought he remembered Galen Marik. Marik, while not appearing in anything after the force unleashed games and tie-in media, showed he had enormous potential that was unexplored. His force potential alone seemed to rival Vader and Sidious . He made his choice, and God nodded. "As you wish." Jake was then consumed by a flash of light. - Dave_Guest8mthコメントCh -1 Mc powers and images.
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This is interesting, but you should integrate Whitebeard in the magic system. And it would be really funny, if he was as big as in the original. And of course please deage him.
Fairy Tail Whitebeard - Dave_Guest8mthコメント
Apocalypse is his father for sure. At least I don’t remember any other old strong earthling. And I think Hela fought him at some point.
On the other hand he's absolutely terrifying… that unbelievably high affinity for death, the vision I and many other seers felt before his birth, plus the fact he's half midgardian. - Dave_Guest8mthコメント
Ne careful with those special writings. Some fanfics were banned because of it.
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Should have sacrificed that stupid plot armor.
Finally she smiled warmly at him," That was just a test. Your wish will be granted and you would not need to sacrifice any of your abilities either. Contrary I will provide a very useful gift for your future endeavors in the marvel universe." - Dave_Guest1yrコメント
Well there would be: Omni force Void force Origin force Force of Devouring
Author Rant: Now I have run into a problem, I can't figure out a name for Dante's force and I can't keep calling it 'the force' every time so I need suggestions. - Dave_Guest1yrコメント
It’s actually the curse of love.
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