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I like clichés. You might find them often in my writing. . . .
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The Magician is a position in a Pro team. Similar to Vice-Captain. I will explain the positions of a team in the future!
Aha you hit the nail on the head. I try to make the fights long to really show that it’s the final battle of the arc. I always felt displeased when it was wrapped up in a chapter or two. But excellent feedback! Character depth was something I wanted to work on as well! It was something I failed to consider upon starting this novel. A lot of clichés and one dimensional character eh? I‘m trying to improve! Thank you!! No offense taken :)
If only I could. . .
It’s in the works! This time with the experience I gained making this one :D
Not too proud of it! A lot of inconsistencies and deviations for me.
Respectable! My apologies it wasn’t to your taste!
I don’t pick favorites ;)
It is silver, others tend to mistake it for white.
I think I’ve improved upon the “hooking” of writing. It’s hard to do so without leaving a lot of cliffhangers though haha! As for classes, I mainly consider them filler content. It’s too restrictive for me, so it’s more of an explanation for builds than actual Classes. If you do stick around I will look forward to further criticism :D
Alas finally! Someone who gives me some good criticism! Yes it's very surface level, I'm extremely inexperienced when it comes to writing. This is my first ever novel, and with a setting I made up on a whim. It's hard to make things deep when I forget a lot of stuff because I make it up on the spot. I ask you forgive me, but I also understand if this book is not for you. Thank you however! I will keep all of this in mind !